As I promised I will send you my short story and correct me if there is a mistake and tell me if my story worth it or not .
Love is like a dark chocolate. Once you start eating it you feel it and once you finish it you cry. I`m about to tell you about that dark chocolate, Dark love. There once two young couples sitting next to a wonderful scene, a river surrounded by trees. A couples that even war can't tear there love. A war between poor and rich. A man with a heart only had. A woman has everything but love. Found in beautiful woods in a man's heart. Years after years and the couple share one and only thing they had and still have, love. That love spread to reach that evil man ears. Who owns everything, with anger in his heart, the life of his destroyed. Sending his best men to track the lovers in the woods, but it was too late, the loving birds had to die after what they saw in the angered man eyes, decided to poison each other and once more be together in the afterlife.
I hope you see it first Dr. Mohammed
ReplyDeleteAs I promised I will send you my short story and correct me if there is a mistake and tell me if my story worth it or not .
Love is like a dark chocolate. Once you start eating it you feel it and once you finish it you cry. I`m about to tell you about that dark chocolate, Dark love.
There once two young couples sitting next to a wonderful scene, a river surrounded by trees. A couples that even war can't tear there love. A war between poor and rich. A man with a heart only had. A woman has everything but love. Found in beautiful woods in a man's heart. Years after years and the couple share one and only thing they had and still have, love.
That love spread to reach that evil man ears. Who owns everything, with anger in his heart, the life of his destroyed. Sending his best men to track the lovers in the woods, but it was too late, the loving birds had to die after what they saw in the angered man eyes, decided to poison each other and once more be together in the afterlife.